Platonic Ideals
PLATONIC IDEALS
draped
in startling beauty
so elegant
sensing
colour
sunflower gold
& buttery yellow
in enticings
glimmers of
flame &scarlet
green & blue
a little
a little
intuitive
&placed
in myth
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
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