Platitudes

Tired platitudes for the pain to drown,
The bridled tongue will keep the fire bound.
A dose of bromide helps the words go down.

Exalting paupers with a golden crown.
Creating hero’s with exalted sound.
Tired platitudes for the pain to drown.

If our words of truth would be met with frown,
Would we eulogize and then chest proud pound?
“A dose of bromide helps the words go down.”

Embellished sackcloth still an ugly gown.
Vapid faces prefer the truth go round.
Tired platitudes for the pain to drown.

If only flattery we dare be shown,
Could weakling hearts bear the weight of truth found?
A dose of bromide helps the words go down.

When counsel concealed from one who is lown,
For what good cause could such ones be renowned?
Tired platitudes for the pain to drown?
A dose of bromide helps the words go down?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:12 PM
An excellent VILLANELLE my friend! Your versing flow and rhymes are spot on and your imagery is outstanding! BRAVO to you!! Best wishes, Keith
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Keith, Thank you for your generous compliment. I'm happy you enjoyed.
Curtis Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 9:34 PM
Very well done, and Thank God for bromide
Johnson Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Thank you. Happy you enjoyed.
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