Platform

Shoved into the light
Speeding through the tunnel bright….
Smashed with all its might
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:44 AM
Not to be flippant but this reminds me of Diana. Three very descriptive words, Robb
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 6:11 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Robb. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Brings back memories of Princess Diana .. great and intense ..full of emotion Robb.. enjoyed tonight with luv.. thankxx for your super blog comment ...sweet ..
Mehta Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Nice senryu with good images on platform, Robb
Onclaud Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 11:19 AM
crash!! enjoyed the bursting imagery of this one, robb.. warmest, nette
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