Platform

Shoved into the light Speeding through the tunnel bright…. Smashed with all its might

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Charles Henderson

Date: 12/1/2010 8:44:00 AM

Not to be flippant but this reminds me of Diana. Three very descriptive words, Robb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2010 6:11:00 AM

We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Robb. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/30/2010 5:15:00 PM

Brings back memories of Princess Diana .. great and intense ..full of emotion Robb.. enjoyed tonight with luv.. thankxx for your super blog comment ...sweet ..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/30/2010 1:07:00 PM

Nice senryu with good images on platform, Robb

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2010 11:19:00 AM

crash!! enjoyed the bursting imagery of this one, robb.. warmest, nette