Plastic Ono Blow-Up Universal Church of Togetherness

This is an unusual write for me
'cause the title came first.
We shall see where it goes.

Blows
is a loaded word ifya think on it.

Having thought some
it goes
that without blows
there'd be no

us

or them

or me or you blowing whatever clarity
we can get, whether through charity
hilarity
or long-haired hippy freak bed-ins

to realize the thing we've named
purpose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sivey Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Strange and very interesting write Nancy! I love reading poetry like this!
Devnath  Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Materially so. Truth lies in. Thanks for sharing. Touched. bl
Lane Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Imagine! Tony
Johnson Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 6:07 AM
this is bloody good, liked the words that flow , without blows there'd be no us, hippys surely be nonplussed, xo babe
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