Plastic Bag

A plastic bag appeared in my dream,
Polluting my thoughts of love
A sign or trickery it may seem
Sent from way above

I look outside and see the garden
My face begins to sag
Oh Lord, I beg your pardon
A rose in a plastic bag
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cornwall Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 8:33 PM
Very nice poem and congrats on feature as well........patrick
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Julian. Love, Carol
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May 14, 2012 at 7:33 AM
this is so clever Julian, such a profound message. harry
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April 6, 2012 at 7:14 PM
umm! Welcome to the Soup dear, I love your work, please keep sharing your thoughts and inspiration here and enjoy the great company of the super poets. A warm welcome to you as I look forward to reading more of what God has blessed you to write. Love, Adeleke
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March 31, 2012 at 8:24 PM
welcome to poetry soup thanks for sharing your wonderful work
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 4:49 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Julian. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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