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Plastic Bag

A plastic bag appeared in my dream, Polluting my thoughts of love A sign or trickery it may seem Sent from way above I look outside and see the garden My face begins to sag Oh Lord, I beg your pardon A rose in a plastic bag

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/19/2012 8:33:00 PM
Very nice poem and congrats on feature as well........patrick
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Date: 5/18/2012 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Julian. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:33:00 AM
this is so clever Julian, such a profound message. harry
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Date: 4/6/2012 7:14:00 PM
umm! Welcome to the Soup dear, I love your work, please keep sharing your thoughts and inspiration here and enjoy the great company of the super poets. A warm welcome to you as I look forward to reading more of what God has blessed you to write. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 3/31/2012 8:24:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup thanks for sharing your wonderful work
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Date: 3/24/2012 4:49:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Julian. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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