Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

Plant

PLANT
                                                  pops up
                                             slight statured

                                   like child from earth's womb
                                  staunch and fights against odds
                                 swears the charge of revamping

                                      "icon for unyielding spirit"



PLACED: 1 st

Image: 3
Pyramids Poetry Contest 
Verse poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Syllable count: HS
Date: 10-06-2022

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Karam Misra June 22, 2022 at 10:20 PM Excellent take on the indomitable spirit prevailing against all odds to emerge as the ultimate winner. Also there is the vernacular allusion to the first leaves in your name itself - Patri! Congratulations on your well-deserved stellar placement. Patri Venkata Ramana June 24, 2022 at 6:02 PM Thank you so much for the compliments! vernacular allusion... exactly.

Eve Roper June 22, 2022 at 8:08 PM Love your take of the contest, Patri . Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. God bless my friend Patri Venkata Ramana June 24, 2022 at 6:01 PM Thank you so much for the best compliments!

Unseeking Seeker June 18, 2022 at 8:06 AM I liked your end-quote! Congrats on your win, Patri Patri Venkata Ramana June 20, 2022 at 10:36 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Joseph May June 18, 2022 at 7:10 AM Soon it wil stand tall, Congrats on your win Patri Patri Venkata Ramana June 20, 2022 at 10:35 PM Thank you so much for the compliments.