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couch sublime for retiree - space spat midst family of potatoes Monoku composed: August 27, 2020

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Alexis Y.

Date: 11/25/2020 4:05:00 PM

Hi Brian. Another good one-liner. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/23/2021 6:35:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. Appreciate your stop by to read my small entry in the Monoku contest. All the best, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2020 2:43:00 PM

ha, I am thinking of my three couch potatoes, three actual small pillows that represent a mom, dad and baby spud! Congrats.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/30/2020 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. You have personal experience of a family feud for couch space probably facing the TV. Good luck. Be well. Sincerely Brian

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2020 1:14:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Brian :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/29/2020 1:42:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. You are so kind in your support of soupers. You're a gem. Best wishes, Brian

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/29/2020 4:59:00 AM

Congrats on your win! Obesity a deadly reality of modern life!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/29/2020 7:03:00 AM

Hello Krish Thank you for your comment. A family of couch potatoes means a real struggle for couch space. Loved your Monoku on Paradise Lost + Regained. Best wishes Brian

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/29/2020 4:51:00 AM

lol the american dream ~ fun one-liner

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/29/2020 1:44:00 PM

My sincere appreciation for your positive comment. So many writes in the contest were stellar. Be well. Brian

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 3:30:00 AM

Ha! Thats awful! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/29/2020 7:05:00 AM

Thank you for running such a fine, inspiring contest. So many superb entries. All the best, Brian