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Plans Skewered

couch sublime for retiree - space spat midst family of potatoes















Monoku composed: August 27, 2020

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Alexis Y.

November 25, 2020 at 4:05 PM

Hi Brian. Another good one-liner. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Brian Sambourne

January 23, 2021 at 6:35 PM

Thank you Alexis. Appreciate your stop by to read my small entry in the Monoku contest. All the best, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2020 at 2:43 PM

ha, I am thinking of my three couch potatoes, three actual small pillows that represent a mom, dad and baby spud! Congrats.

Brian Sambourne

August 30, 2020 at 2:50 PM

Thank you Andrea. You have personal experience of a family feud for couch space probably facing the TV. Good luck. Be well. Sincerely Brian

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2020 at 1:14 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Brian :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Sambourne

August 29, 2020 at 1:42 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. You are so kind in your support of soupers. You're a gem. Best wishes, Brian

Krish Radhakrishna

August 29, 2020 at 4:59 AM

Congrats on your win! Obesity a deadly reality of modern life!

Brian Sambourne

August 29, 2020 at 7:03 AM

Hello Krish Thank you for your comment. A family of couch potatoes means a real struggle for couch space. Loved your Monoku on Paradise Lost + Regained. Best wishes Brian