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Planned Suicide

Planned Suicide Lying on the bed Crying for help The only other option Is a slow painless death She picks up the telephone Talking to a friend My life is useless It somehow must end There’s no joy in Her soul today Visions of suicide in Her head do play When she needed someone To just be there They turned their backs They just didn’t care She went into the bathroom And looked into the mirror Heart broken, lonely, Sad and teary No one would answer her When she calls No, not a soul, Not anyone at all She held up her arms and Said, my life is a twist Seconds later she Cut both her wrists. Laying on the floor In a puddle of blood Crying, and sad because No one gave her love While slowly closing her eyes One more time she cried; It’s over for me now No more hurt inside Before she planned This selfish act She wrote a note And explained the facts The note said I’m leaving Not that anyone care When I needed you the most You were never there You can’t find my life Because Now I am free No one ever cared what Happened to me I don’t have to hear Or put up with lies No one made me do this It’s a planned suicide!!!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/15/2012 9:16:00 PM
Awesome words you got up there,,, congrats on your well deserved win ;}
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Date: 11/30/2012 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Richard's "Suicide Survivor" contest Lillie. Love, Carol
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Lillie Williams
Date: 11/30/2012 1:02:00 PM
thanks Carol. Have a blessed week-end and may God bless you always.
Date: 11/22/2012 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations with your deep winning poem...have a nice thanksgiving day...love pd
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Lillie Williams
Date: 11/26/2012 12:32:00 PM
Thank you very much. I have been out for a while, but now I am back, and I thank you so much for your review on my work. May God bless you always! :-)
Date: 11/20/2012 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your Hm Lillie xx
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Lillie Williams
Date: 11/26/2012 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Mandy. I value your opinion. Be blessed always! :-)
Date: 11/16/2012 2:25:00 PM
Told exactly like it is, Lillie, this is a very well and graphicly written poem, excellent work....
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Lillie Williams
Date: 11/26/2012 12:35:00 PM
I appreciate that Harry. Thanks for visiting my work. Come back anytime! :-)
Date: 11/15/2012 10:25:00 AM
A sad poem ..... man must be "deep down" when one is planning to take his own life. - There is always someone who loves you, who will be left with grief. - Lillie, you've written a good poem - thanks for your visit and I appreciate your comments - welcome back another time. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Lillie Williams
Date: 11/15/2012 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Anne for visiting my work. I enjoy having you here and you are always welcome. Sometimes life tries to get the best of us, but as long as we know that someone cares: it makes a world of different. Thanks so much!!!
Date: 11/14/2012 2:37:00 PM
Winner for sure...I hope just for the contest and not what is happening to you..Sara
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Lillie Williams
Date: 11/14/2012 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Sara. Prayers are always needed. I appreciate you reviewing my writing. I am so glad that you like it. Thanks so much. I want to give you a smile like Catie has given me. :-) Thanks.

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