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Planetarium

Moonlight and night stars Men, women, children, lovers… Entrance to delight. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 17, 2010 Poetic form: Haiku

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Date: 1/18/2010 9:45:00 AM
I have enjoyed everything I have read from you today.... Excellent work my friend.....:JP]
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Date: 1/17/2010 9:57:00 PM
Very nice...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/17/2010 5:28:00 PM
What an uplifting view. Enjoyed the perspective. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:46:00 PM
Interesting write in this one, contest material. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/17/2010 3:46:00 PM
great memories of my youth return to me with this fine Haiku! Dane Ann....my Mom took me and my brother often! in Minneapolis, thanks! jimbo
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