Planetarium

Moonlight and night stars
Men, women, children, lovers…
Entrance to delight. 

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    January 17, 2010

Poetic form:  Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pickett Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 9:45 AM
I have enjoyed everything I have read from you today.... Excellent work my friend.....:JP]
Owens Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Very nice...enjoyed...Marty
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January 17, 2010 at 5:28 PM
What an uplifting view. Enjoyed the perspective. Keep on writing! Karen
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Interesting write in this one, contest material. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 17, 2010 at 3:46 PM
great memories of my youth return to me with this fine Haiku! Dane Ann....my Mom took me and my brother often! in Minneapolis, thanks! jimbo
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