Plan B

When ev'ry soul should be in bed, I am wide awake! And what worried thoughts race through my head Were made by my mistakes Makes me question Truths I've read Just while my stomach aches But send me in, I'll try again- To mend what Sorrow breaks!

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/6/2013 5:51:00 PM

Plan A apparently doesn't work and now you're stuck going round and round in Plan B. Sorrow, mistakes, stomach aches... you're going to get an ulcer ... Well done :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/8/2013 10:42:00 AM

Plan A has rarely panned out for me, primarily because it's usually the more difficult solution, and I am an evader and procrastinator and just plain lazy most of the time lol My life has revolved around Plans B through Z. Thanks for the review, Karen :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2013 8:06:00 AM

Mending broken fences is not easy sometimes and there is always a weak place and evidence of the break in the lines of the repair..Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work..Sara

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/8/2013 10:37:00 AM

Many thanks for the read and reply, Sara; I appreciate your kind words :)