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Plain Beauty

plain finch puffs her chest dew and sunlight set the stage she trills wild glory Written on 6/20/2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 6:55:00 PM

It truly is a beautiful picture of glory. Congrats on your win, Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2019 4:47:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Laura! That trill thrills! Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 5:30:00 PM

Thank you, Paul! Glad you liked this! :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/22/2019 2:51:00 AM

Many congrats on your beautiful win Laura. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 5:29:00 PM

Thank you, Ann! :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/22/2019 1:02:00 AM

Wonderful! I love the scene you created in your Haiku

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 5:29:00 PM

Thank you, Timothy! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2019 8:40:00 PM

Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your podium finish. Well done.

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/21/2019 11:31:00 PM

Thank you, Line! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/21/2019 6:54:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your silver win in the contest with your beautiful haiku, love the imagery, enjoyed!

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/21/2019 7:50:00 PM

Thanks so very much for my placement in your contest, Tania! I’m thrilled!! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2019 3:22:00 PM

what a beauty, laura... i like birdsongs and this 'ku says it all!...happy huggs

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/21/2019 4:10:00 PM

Thanks so much, Nette! So glad you liked this! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/20/2019 8:48:00 PM

'She trills wild glory' -- such a vivid image! It comes to life in my brain, as I hear the song. Bravo. See this one I the winner's circle, Laura. :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2019 2:00:00 PM

As predicted, you and the finch look glorious in the winner's circle! :) gw

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2019 10:36:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon! I got the “glory” idea from a man at our church who, when excited about what is being preached from the pulpit, states a hearty “Glory” of praise! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/20/2019 7:34:00 PM

Laura, your lively imagery is captivating with your second line being especially stunning. Your Haiku is beautifully done. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2019 10:34:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan! It took awhile to get the right words to set it off...glad you liked this one! :)