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Plain Beauty

plain finch puffs her chest dew and sunlight set the stage she trills wild glory Written on 6/20/2019

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Date: 6/22/2019 6:55:00 PM
It truly is a beautiful picture of glory. Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 11:08:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 6/22/2019 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Laura! That trill thrills! Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! Glad you liked this! :)
Date: 6/22/2019 2:51:00 AM
Many congrats on your beautiful win Laura. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Ann! :)
Date: 6/22/2019 1:02:00 AM
Wonderful! I love the scene you created in your Haiku
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2019 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Timothy! :)
Date: 6/21/2019 8:40:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your podium finish. Well done.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/21/2019 11:31:00 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
Date: 6/21/2019 6:54:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your silver win in the contest with your beautiful haiku, love the imagery, enjoyed!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/21/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thanks so very much for my placement in your contest, Tania! I’m thrilled!! :)
Date: 6/21/2019 3:22:00 PM
what a beauty, laura... i like birdsongs and this 'ku says it all!...happy huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/21/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nette! So glad you liked this! :)
Date: 6/20/2019 8:48:00 PM
'She trills wild glory' -- such a vivid image! It comes to life in my brain, as I hear the song. Bravo. See this one I the winner's circle, Laura. :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2019 2:00:00 PM
As predicted, you and the finch look glorious in the winner's circle! :) gw
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2019 10:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! I got the “glory” idea from a man at our church who, when excited about what is being preached from the pulpit, states a hearty “Glory” of praise! :)
Date: 6/20/2019 7:34:00 PM
Laura, your lively imagery is captivating with your second line being especially stunning. Your Haiku is beautifully done. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2019 10:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! It took awhile to get the right words to set it off...glad you liked this one! :)