Place Your Faith In God Collaboration With Mystic Rose

Every one struggles each day to pass through life's walls 
and often we hit our heads many a time in search for doors 
To renew our strength and faith we need to defeat the silence 
and live each day as a new born child, with hope and worth anew 


Just like the wind renews itself, we too can waft our cares away 
when death gives us a second chance, to regain and re-assess 
It gives us time to appreciate what we have, 
cause if we don't, 
then the years will pass us by and sift us through like sand, 
until we're nigh; 
Life ain't too long, and it ain't too short either, 
and God is the only true giver and blessed retriever; 

So why don't we live our lives to the fullest potential? 
Because often we hesitate, as days and years turn exponential; 
We choose to cling to fear, but where is the just reward? 
it will come, if you pray and gently turn inward.. 
Count your blessings every day and all that comes your way 
It is the better way; 

Faith, the only thing that will never let you down 
will alleviate the screaming voices that do you harm 
Just listen to the whispers of your soul, the bridge of life 
is kept together by the bond of love, God ends all strife... 

Written by: Dalia Shahein & Mystic Rose 

January 6, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/7/2016 6:45:00 AM
A lovely message behind this. I can feel the presence of both of you in this - great job Dalia and Mystic.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/7/2016 7:06:00 AM
We thank you my friend for ur sweet comment and ur pleasing visit, much appreciated....hugs / / :)
Date: 1/6/2016 9:58:00 PM
Dalia and Sissy Vie, great collaboration of you two... =`) This made me a lil teary eyed as I am blessed and uplifted by your poem today.. =`) ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 10:03:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear for ur supportive words and your pleasant, delightful visit , me and lovely Vienna appreciate it so much , have a lovely day and hugs / / :) dalia
Date: 1/6/2016 6:41:00 PM
Counting belessings is like counting my heartbeats of love, countless and flowing from the same source of divinity Vienna and Dalia...its amazing how something so countless can be so simple in it's math ladies...the one I love really taught me this. "Just like the wind renews itself, we too can waft away our cares...God is the only true giver and blessed retriever." this is natural power...J.A.B.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 7:07:00 PM
My dear Justin both of me and Vienna thank you so much for your lovely and delightful visit as well as your wise and beautiful comment , we appreciate it so much , many thanks and hugs / / :)
Date: 1/6/2016 4:07:00 PM
excellent collaboration...it's great having two powerhouse stand side to side, a job well done to you guys
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear for ur sweet and delightful words , me and mystic we both appreciate your kind and lovely comment, hugs / / :)
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