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If anyone in the South says “drought”! For the rain never stops! 

expecting my home to dislodge and rainwater to pillow my window panes for it rains and rains and rains insane days upon days the dark disguise breeds imagination for it pours pours pours as the magician’s apprentice dreams more and more 2/10/2018

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Date: 2/12/2018 5:22:00 AM
Nice sardonic comment on the weather with a perfect allusion to the Soorcerer’s Apprentice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Date: 2/11/2018 5:37:00 PM
Reread your poem and had to tell you how I love the Mickey Mouse comparison. Great little poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 6:38:00 PM
Thanks again, sweet Line! :) so very nice of you! Kim
Date: 2/11/2018 11:39:00 AM
Haha,,, we also wonder when the rain will stop and pray it doesn't wash my home away... I loved the magician's apprentice..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Eve! :)
Date: 2/11/2018 10:50:00 AM
You probably know my views on nature and the weather, regardless I wouldn't wish them on anybody. You take care Kime, best wishes... Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 12:20:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 2/11/2018 7:56:00 AM
Yes it sounds awful, you descrbed it very well..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/11/2018 6:58:00 AM
Charming poem. I can't help but think that your poetic rain might be more pleasant than our cold snow. Well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 7:25:00 AM
I think we are both ready for some sunshine, dear Line! :)
Date: 2/11/2018 6:26:00 AM
A good rain storm is quite awesome to see , not days of it though, maybe time to start building an ark. Regards Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/11/2018 7:20:00 AM
Mother nature can be really devastating, so heart-breaking to see on the news.Everything they own and worked hard for gone in a matter of hours Regards Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 6:31:00 AM
LOL! The story of Georgia...from drought to flood!

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