Pitapat Torrents


The grey taps of the heavens are leaking,
    Thunder goes ka-boom,
Heavy rains drip drip with lightning streaking,
    Zipping through the gloom;

Non-stop, the water flows, forming puddles,
    Feet squish through the rain,
Inside our home, under blanket cuddles,
    We wish to remain;

At night, the frogs, they ribbit- ribbit loud,
    Enjoying the damp,
Rivers flow on streets under the storm cloud,
    Showering its stamp;

Praying for this pitter-patter to end,
    Rain drumming the land,
How much more torrent from the sky'll descend?
        No more can we stand.



11.10.2021




For Emile Pinet's "Onomatopoeia" contest

Syllable count: 10.5.10.5 (checked with howmanysyllables.com)

Rhymes checked with rhymezone.com
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Gorgeous entry for this contest.
Leiser Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Wonderful imagery and sound dad that bring one there! Very well written, Jo! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 8:54 AM
You used sounds perfectly I'm sure this will rate high. Best for a win.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 7:41 AM
I love this so. Beautiful. A wonderful write. God bless you always! Love, Gina
Bayles Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 7:37 AM
I enjoyed your poem, Jo. Good going, I always feel this type of poem is hard to write.
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 5:38 AM
Your words evoke the sounds--aptly scripted for the contest, Jo.
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