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Pirates

Smashing the duck, crushing the wood For winning the battle, the pirates stood Cursing the heart and with the sin The thunder bolts, but fight to win..!!! The storms, thunder and the lightning that glow Err...The mistakes happens and the blood flow Thousands can sleep without the fear Only ‘we won’ the sound to hear..!!! The end comes with the blood All dies and the blood flood To the water, everything goes dark One of them shouts, we won the war Though, one of them won but one lose The wind blow with the dark sad news The blood flow in the water and in the gill The journey of pirates was then and still..!!!

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Date: 8/9/2014 8:26:00 AM
Well done , Enjoyed your vivid account of that epic struggle for life on the sea
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Bohari Mohammad
Date: 8/9/2014 8:37:00 AM
Thanks...For the reply
Date: 7/26/2014 10:55:00 AM
No one ever wins in a war! There are only survivors. This is a good write Bohari. God Bless. Dave.
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Date: 6/21/2014 8:18:00 AM
Once again hello, I enjoyed and felt sad by your this piece it shows your imagination and that is really great I really wanted you, to reply my email
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