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---Pinwheel Milky Way

pinwheel milky way
freeze the upward path of night
children’s choir sings

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:31 PM

aweee... love this...pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 29, 2011 at 3:54 PM

Bravo for being on the Hot List of poems with this stunner Debbie.. a terrific piece of creativity luv... am working on your contest entry for Shamans so hope u will be pleasantly surprised ... good luck with this new theme ..

Eiken Laan

March 29, 2011 at 10:43 AM

Debbie, This is beautiful, well done on your win:))

Kash Poet

March 29, 2011 at 9:18 AM

Congrats Debbie on your well deserved win!Wonderful Haiku!---kashinath

Audrey Haick

March 28, 2011 at 6:10 PM

!! Congratulations on your 8th Place win, Debbie! Love the view you captured from the picture. Always, Annalise

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2011 at 1:01 PM

I love that last line especially!! It is like watching a movie with a wonderful musical score!! Exactly what they would use for a scene like this!! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 28, 2011 at 12:44 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Rick, Debbie

Carolyn Devonshire

March 28, 2011 at 12:42 PM

What an interesting and delightful interpretation of the photo, Deb. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2011 at 11:59 AM

Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with these elegant words luv... beautiful photo and beautiful words to compliment it.. enjoy with luv..