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seek shelter
     in my loving
          embrace;
               your safest place.

should the stars desert
     the night sky,
          should spring
               flowers wilt,

should the moon
     lose its glow
          should the sun
               lose most of its warmth,

my arms still won't release
     its
        hold...pinky promise!

                (yalto)


"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

BRIAN'S CHOICE B,any form,any theme poetry contest
Contest Judged:  5/13/2020 (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 

Date written: 05/13/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/14/2020 2:02:00 AM
picturesque Imagery Bravo!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2020 4:38:00 AM
Thank you, Gideon:-)
Date: 5/13/2020 5:40:00 PM
Oh poet! Poet! What a great poet! Love the ending!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/13/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Kim:-) Most obliged.

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