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seek shelter in my loving embrace; your safest place. should the stars desert the night sky, should spring flowers wilt, should the moon lose its glow should the sun lose most of its warmth, my arms still won't release its hold...pinky promise! (yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables BRIAN'S CHOICE B,any form,any theme poetry contest Contest Judged: 5/13/2020 (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date written: 05/13/2020

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Date: 5/14/2020 2:02:00 AM
picturesque Imagery Bravo!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2020 4:38:00 AM
Thank you, Gideon:-)
Date: 5/13/2020 5:40:00 PM
Oh poet! Poet! What a great poet! Love the ending!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/13/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Kim:-) Most obliged.

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