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Pinkie Swear

T he little boy always brought his toy truck H e had many kinds of toy trucks to share E very day she would come to the park B ringing her dollies with their golden hair I n the age of pureness of five and four R easoning of nannies who watch this pair D oes not include what children talk about S o they sit and read and listen and stare A chance to catch forty and not get caught N odding and squinting and feigning the glare D ozing off longer and longer each time T wo bright young angels playing “double dare” H e with nothing on but his birthday suit E ven she with just a bow in her hair B eing “mommy and daddy” from their eyes E very secret act done with pinkie swear E ach pureness when lost can never return S uch is the way of secrets we must bear. © Aug 07 2010 For Carol's "Birds and Bees" contest

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Date: 7/12/2011 3:25:00 PM
If you haven't entered my contest please help me out use this, tack on and ABC verse & a short Alliterative verse [just cram the STOP concept in there somewhere...halt etc] Pretty please with sugar! Light & Love
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:49:00 PM
Oh yes, way to go, Charles!
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:46:00 AM
Very interesting write, Charles. Good luck in the contest! Dan C
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Date: 8/7/2010 8:11:00 AM
Very profound write, Charles. Good luck
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:30:00 AM
If they were older, I would say these two were quite naughty. Being children, however, they are just curious. Very original approach to Carol's contest. Love it! Soup mail re this poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:34:00 PM
yupp what is done as children with out knowing the intentions of the elder way, sure is lost in age, enjoyed reading your acrostic very good c:
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