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Pink Carnations

For Carole Whenever there would seem to be A serious argument between you and me Or to ease the pain of a fight And make the ugly seem the right I never had a love before That I could pamper, love, adore... I thought you understood Those times that things weren't going good You did For awhile It would always make you smile We'd make up and forget the night before Those times I'd bring a pink carnation to your door You said, "No man ever loved me before." And I could see It wasn't that you didn't love me They ceased to erase the pain Those pink carnations I brought to your door All the hours and money spent Buying flowers to hide mistakes I never meant If only I had spent more time In loving you Maybe you would now be mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/15/2016 11:19:00 PM
Kilburn, nice to see this write again. Skat
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:50:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kilburn :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/3/2014 3:00:00 PM
Sad ending. Nicely done.
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Date: 5/3/2014 12:22:00 AM
Hi Kilburn, the ending is deep... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/2/2014 11:39:00 PM
Kilburn, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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