Pink

Pink Pink, is the blessed colour of Love. Pink, from one’s knee, the heaven above. OH !, to French kiss those sweet pink lips. One eyeing those shapely, gorgeous hips. On that journey one takes to heavenly bliss. No woman, in the pink, should ever miss. B. J. “A ” 2 April 2nd 2017

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/25/2020 2:33:00 AM

Pink- the color of love, the color of dream, the color of romanticism, the color of purified heart.......... it's beautiful poem..... enjoyable

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 6/25/2020 10:45:00 AM

--------------------------------------------------------------- Wm. J. Atfield Jr. bja2mgmenter@gmail.com Thursday June, 25th, 2020, at 8:44 AM Thank you Mahtab Bangalee for your visit and kind “ .......... it's beautiful poem..... enjoyable" ” words . B. J. “A ” 2

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/12/2017 6:55:00 PM

Pink speaks to me as the engenue of colours, young, innocent love. Beneath which hormones rage Now I prefer the even heat of a well stoked fire.

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 10/12/2017 9:14:00 PM

I am impressed Patricia, not a subject I thought many, if any would get, or understand its true essence . I have to say my Dear, that one does not need to be an ingénue, does not have to be naïve nor young, to know the joys, the pleasures of a man who is well versed in speaking in tongues . I realize that I may be stepping over some boundaries ???, but maybe not “ Beneath which hormones rage ” and “ Now I prefer the even heat of a well stoked fire. ”. No better way to climb that ladder to heavenly ecstasy, divine bliss, than with hands on and a voice that sends shivers down ones spine, also with the flames from a mighty oak to give that “ even heat of a well stoked fire. ” all that one could ask for in that dimensional moment. I know that the other dimension “ innocent love.” is the climax of such playfulness . Bill .

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/2/2017 4:44:00 PM

Hello William J. Atfield, First I would like to say, pink is my favourite colour. I wear pink often. So I have enjoyed this poem. Nice to meet you.

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 4/3/2017 2:43:00 PM

Good afternoon Darlene Beaulieu : Thank you for stopping by and for the lovely comment “ So I have enjoyed this poem. ”, I am so glad that I was able to give a little pleasure Darlene . Back at you “ Nice to meet you. ” my Dear . B. J. “A” 2 (( Bill . ))