Pinewood

drifting pollen swathes golden contours round wood’s edge fox cubs investigate

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Deb M

Date: 3/19/2023 9:56:00 AM

Lovely Peter! Debx

Peter Rees
Date: 3/23/2023 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Deb

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/15/2023 1:15:00 AM

A beautiful vision, I imagine watched as if from the position of woodland sprite who is fluttering between the trees :)

Peter Rees
Date: 3/23/2023 2:21:00 PM

Thanks DD, I like your vision. Peter.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/14/2023 9:25:00 PM

Fantastic haiku!

Peter Rees
Date: 3/23/2023 2:24:00 PM

Thanks Fin for your brilliant comment

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/14/2023 6:12:00 PM

This is delightful. Peter.

Peter Rees
Date: 3/23/2023 2:23:00 PM

Thank you for this fine comment. Much appreciated.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 3/14/2023 10:57:00 AM

Both ocular and olfactory. I have many poems on this beautiful animal native to my New England. If you'd care to read one of my favorites, I'll post it. Best to you in yout writing endeavors. / Maurice

Peter Rees
Date: 3/14/2023 11:10:00 AM

Hi Maurice, thanks for your comments. I would love to see one of your fox poems, so yes please post. Best wishes, Peter