Pine's Amber Needles

pine's amber needles contrast summer's green... forest's new flooring

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2012 3:20:00 PM

love this one, my friend - it reminds me of walks in the pine woods with Pads

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/9/2012 3:13:00 PM

sure is, Sara, and this is a wonder Haiku...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/8/2012 5:35:00 PM

Sara, the image is fascinating... lol... as far as the leaves laying on the gound,, My son loves raking... xox~ always~ pd

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/8/2012 5:08:00 PM

Lol, the forest does get new flooring quite often, doesn't it? Like your poem, Sara. Nice Haiku! Love ya, Toquyen

Rollo West

Date: 11/8/2012 4:43:00 PM

can smell the evergreens now. Rollo

Team Poetrysoup

Date: 11/8/2012 3:43:00 PM

You forgot a line. "Raking in pain." :-)

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/8/2012 5:33:00 PM

lol...you see even the soup..is reading SARA....yeah....

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2012 3:15:00 PM

This is a very descriptive write that showers me with awesome images! I really enjoyed reading this masterfully written and delightfully pieced together poem this afternoon! What an outstanding and tremendous piece, Great Work!!