Home » Poems » Sara Kendrick » Pine's Amber Needles

Pine's Amber Needles

pine's amber needles
contrast summer's green...
forest's new flooring

naturehaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jack Horne

November 10, 2012 at 3:20 PM

love this one, my friend - it reminds me of walks in the pine woods with Pads

Harry Horsman

November 9, 2012 at 3:13 PM

sure is, Sara, and this is a wonder Haiku...

Poet Destroyer A

November 8, 2012 at 5:35 PM

Sara, the image is fascinating... lol... as far as the leaves laying on the gound,, My son loves raking... xox~ always~ pd

Toquyen Harrell

November 8, 2012 at 5:08 PM

Lol, the forest does get new flooring quite often, doesn't it? Like your poem, Sara. Nice Haiku! Love ya, Toquyen

Rollo West

November 8, 2012 at 4:43 PM

can smell the evergreens now. Rollo

Team Poetrysoup

November 8, 2012 at 3:43 PM

You forgot a line. "Raking in pain." :-)

Poet Destroyer A

November 8, 2012 at 5:33 PM

lol...you see even the soup..is reading SARA....yeah....

Russell Sivey

November 8, 2012 at 3:15 PM

This is a very descriptive write that showers me with awesome images! I really enjoyed reading this masterfully written and delightfully pieced together poem this afternoon! What an outstanding and tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Pine's Amber Needles

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources