Pines

skyline pines aligned within the needles doves coo… branches cradle peace =============== Brian Strand Contest Name A FREE CHOICE AGAIN

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/28/2011 10:59:00 AM

aww what a sweet peaceful poem. love the "branches cradle" - congrats on your win :)

Margaret Okubo

Date: 11/27/2011 8:32:00 AM

How beautiful with such vivid imagery. Belated thanks for your comment on my poem"Old Age."

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/23/2011 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this contest today Moses. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/23/2011 9:24:00 AM

A very nice Haiku John. Enjoyed

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/21/2011 12:53:00 PM

Very nice my friend... cool images throughout... Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2011 11:41:00 AM

Oh, the image you created in your poem would make a lovely Christmas card, John. So soothing and beautiful! Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn