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11/03/21
pine needles soon amber colored trickle among azaleas' strewn
In the thinking process.. Finis' today..

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Date: 11/12/2021 10:08:00 PM
very nice Haiku!!
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Date: 11/11/2021 2:03:00 AM
Nice one. We will be having a grand time in Johannesburg. I lived there for ten years and my wife grew up there. Will be sitting two houses, grand villas with luxury plus. Kind wishes, Kind wishes, Kai
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2021 3:55:00 AM
Reads like you are having a grand time in Johannesburg. I hope that it is a lovely vacation? there. Thanks for taking time to comment on my work while away. Sara
Date: 11/5/2021 6:40:00 AM
A plague of pine needles, says my wife, sweeping up. Another of Nature’s lush colourful occasional carpets to be enjoyed in the moment. Amber coloured trickle ? Yes, lovely. Thank you.
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Date: 11/5/2021 1:28:00 PM
Peter, Yes, they can be work. Robert Frost wrote a poem about leaves being a crop. I always liked that one. Thank you for your visit and taking time to comment. Sara
Date: 11/3/2021 3:57:00 PM
I can see those pines cones on the ground among those azaleas. Nice haiku Sara. love phyl
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Date: 11/4/2021 2:22:00 PM
Phyllis, Yes, those pine cones can be a problem. Of course, one can use them for decorations, add them to the fire as a starter, etc. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 11/3/2021 3:14:00 PM
This is a rather beautiful bit of imagery; well penned.
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Date: 11/4/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, M.L., I appreciate the time spent here. Your thoughts add so much to my page. Sara
Date: 11/2/2021 6:28:00 PM
In the thinking process. Some people don’t realize that Pineneedles carry a lot of turpentine and kill the grass underneath them. Hugs eve
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2021 4:45:00 AM
Eve, I guess that is one reason we here in the south use them to go around our flower beds and shrubs to as a mulch and as a weed barrier. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 11/2/2021 5:38:00 PM
very creatively written and displayed dear Sara, xo
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2021 4:38:00 AM
Mystic, Come back when I have a little more to read. Thanks ..Sara
Date: 11/2/2021 1:49:00 PM
So kind with your words.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2021 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Chris..SK

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