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Pine Needles

11/03/21

pine needles soon
 amber colored trickle among
azaleas' strewn  





In the thinking process..
Finis' today..

naturehaiku

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Howard Kerr

December 12, 2025 at 11:11 PM

The imagery in this poem is amazing. The embedded detail is so original. Thanks, Sara, for your recent comments on my posts Howard

Sara Kendrick

December 13, 2025 at 4:05 AM

Howard, it's been a while since I wrote this one and I had to think a minute about it myself. Your kind review is encouraging. Sara K

Mulu Magdalinos

November 12, 2021 at 10:08 PM

very nice Haiku!!

Kai Michael Neumann

November 11, 2021 at 2:03 AM

Nice one. We will be having a grand time in Johannesburg. I lived there for ten years and my wife grew up there. Will be sitting two houses, grand villas with luxury plus. Kind wishes, Kind wishes, Kai

Sara Kendrick

November 13, 2021 at 3:55 AM

Reads like you are having a grand time in Johannesburg. I hope that it is a lovely vacation? there. Thanks for taking time to comment on my work while away. Sara

Peter Rees

November 5, 2021 at 6:40 AM

A plague of pine needles, says my wife, sweeping up. Another of Nature’s lush colourful occasional carpets to be enjoyed in the moment. Amber coloured trickle ? Yes, lovely. Thank you.

Sara Kendrick

November 5, 2021 at 1:28 PM

Peter, Yes, they can be work. Robert Frost wrote a poem about leaves being a crop. I always liked that one. Thank you for your visit and taking time to comment. Sara

Phyllis Babcock

November 3, 2021 at 3:57 PM

I can see those pines cones on the ground among those azaleas. Nice haiku Sara. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

November 4, 2021 at 2:22 PM

Phyllis, Yes, those pine cones can be a problem. Of course, one can use them for decorations, add them to the fire as a starter, etc. Thanks for the visit. Sara

M. L. Kiser

November 3, 2021 at 3:14 PM

This is a rather beautiful bit of imagery; well penned.

Sara Kendrick

November 4, 2021 at 9:23 AM

Thank you, M.L., I appreciate the time spent here. Your thoughts add so much to my page. Sara

Eve Roper

November 2, 2021 at 6:28 PM

In the thinking process. Some people don’t realize that Pineneedles carry a lot of turpentine and kill the grass underneath them. Hugs eve

Sara Kendrick

November 3, 2021 at 4:45 AM

Eve, I guess that is one reason we here in the south use them to go around our flower beds and shrubs to as a mulch and as a weed barrier. Thanks for dropping by. Sara