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Pin Pricks of Light

The heavens, speckled with small dots of light Sometimes shooting as they pass through the night Many pin pricks scattered throughout the sky Allows spent prowess to pound way up high I delight in the show of sparkling stars All blasts a form shining beyond, so far Master of the lights is the humble moon Covers its fair share of beams like a tune Harmony, the light of the sky exists Coexisting with a warmth that’s betwixt Once the sky is clear, twinkling pebbles rock A glow so perfect, there’s never a block The warmth of the sky comes down to the Earth Beauty and fondness illustrates the birth… Of the speckled tiny dotted heaven The greatest of numbers, number seven Fathered the smiles off of people’s faces The light arrives and then blesses with grace The moon escapes, brings with it all its light Stars all align with randomness tonight Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/16/2014 3:49:00 PM
wonderful write here too, my friend. Hope you're having a great week
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:21:00 PM
This made me smile with the elegant declarations you made in this writing. There's a lot of gentle soul embedded within. Excellent job!
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Date: 1/14/2014 10:35:00 AM
glorious, glorious expressions of a celestial wonder, russell... a galaxy of images lights this page with a 'A glow so perfect, there’s never a block..'... greeat stuff!.. huggs
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:43:00 AM
I think no I know that this is the most beautiful poem I have read this year it has everything Russell most of all the picture painted Shadow x smile
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Date: 1/14/2014 4:50:00 AM
Great work to start the day..I don't see the stars that often for I am a day person mostly but they are amazing..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/14/2014 12:27:00 AM
I enjoyed your pin prick image for stars. the last line is so perfectly lovely in that almost contradiction of alignment and randomness!
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