The Situation Poet Rhyme

Pimp My Ride

a mispelled word is like a dent
in a poem
words that don't rhyme ruin
the decorum
mistakes are no different
there like a scratch in the paint
if your serious about writing 
don't use the word "aint"
extreemly bad taste can be worse 
than a scar
profain and foul language
stain just like tar
dull and depressing
the dust of disdain
what message of wisdom
by reading was gained
don't blimish the finish
polish each word
poetry driven respectfully
may soon one day be heard

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Moses Onyango April 7, 2013 at 2:49 PM true

Pace Ink-U-Script April 3, 2013 at 9:26 AM I love your message..excellent write!!

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2013 at 3:09 PM Good advice contained within these lines..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley April 1, 2013 at 3:42 AM Another clever gem, you seem to take an idea and breathe life into it in your own special way. Always a pleasure to spend time here with you! :)

Judy Konos March 31, 2013 at 6:11 PM God gave me a gift of 86,400 seconds today and I want to use a couple of them to say, Thanks I enjoyed this!