Shirley Hawkins Poet Rhyme

Pills and Ills

I have prescriptions coming out of my ears,
Do I take too many,
Something I fear.
I take so many pills and potions,
Ointments and such,
I now use a walker
Why do I need this crutch?
Age has caught up with me,
I have to say.
Writing this has tired me.
I bid you all G'day.

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L Milton Hankins November 13, 2021 at 9:51 AM Sometimes I feel the same way. But, then, at other times I say, "Better living through chemistry." One thing is for sure, without my pills I wouldn't be around for very long! Shirley Hawkins November 13, 2021 at 3:55 PM It is the frustration of not being able do the things I used to just a few months ago that bothers me the most.

Deb M November 12, 2021 at 10:11 PM Hi Shirley….. Nice funny poem Shirley and relatable …..I’m starting to feel the effects of older age and I’ve just got here!!Debx Shirley Hawkins November 13, 2021 at 4:03 PM Hi Deb M So pleased the poem made you laugh. Thank you, for your kind comment. I am 84 and really should not complain. Age comes on you suddenly doesn't it. I hope you are having a pleasant week ene....Best Wishes Shirley.