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Pills

Woosh, there goes my life I need to have a gripe Minute by minute, hour by hour Absorbing all your fire power Shouting at me, hear and there Ceramic crashing everywhere God, you need some pills To introduce you to some chills To make you realise, I am only a man And I don’t mean the bogeyman Til death do us part, what a joke My whole entire life has just gone up in smoke Look out, you scream Flashing light, sounds, am I in a day dream looking up at the ceiling I can’t quite make out what I’m feeling Then, I realised it was you That had clobbered me with a horseshoe That once lived above the living room door But is now lying by the side of me on the floor God, if you can hear me at the bottom of this black hill Please, please, I beg you!! Allow me just a few of my pills.

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Date: 9/20/2017 10:06:00 AM
This one really flows and rhymes well.. Stay away from those pills though...
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/2/2017 3:11:00 AM
thank you for your comments....Its a wonderful boost to have...
Date: 9/20/2017 9:35:00 AM
Please feel free to share any comments you have, I am new to poetry and would take any advice on board. thanks Craig
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