Pillars To Life Satisfaction

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Assertive rage can compel a dart to strike viciously. Bitterness is a sequel to releasing mutual animosity. Contain your vexation, despite if you are incited callously. Don't yell; you consider no idea how others feel wimpy. Enkindling your day: Today will be an avid day, kindly. Forget Yesterday; the present is splendor for obstinacy! God gathers your essay, but you can't do it all prudishly. Heaven sustains the individual to utter a possibility! If you undergo anxiously, settle on a ramble instantly. Jaded times will strike, so stay alert for vulnerability. Know that if you don't prevail, don't turn shaken, truly. Lonely, lead to a call, text people, aim to be praiseworthy. Moments fly; you must admire each one carefully. No man should agonize loose, yet you unstrain barefacedly. Only god judge, your verdict won't reckon appropriately. Pander to and thank mates, span all the way genuinely. Quietness is a deep inner time that offers harmony. Respect all humans, don't oppose their equanimity. Savor every day; ne'er grasp when it will decrease unstintingly. There's no such object being a stable future, meritoriously. Unwrap all the strain within your ribcage and be sprightly. Value the cockcrow; don't doze and gust it, bluntly. When blight strikes, do not unbolt the entry seriously. Xerochrysum is a dainty flower, so blare collect plenty! Yellow is a lovely shade; aim to exhibit it proudly. Zealously divvy up every infelicity and mastery, avidly. Written: November 14, 2021 Alphabet Soup Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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David Kavanagh

Date: 11/15/2021 11:14:00 AM

Great skill with the pen Lasaad, A huge write, bursting with philosophy and imagery, very difficult to achieve this kind of form and maintain it throughout the poem, must be a big contender in the contest, all the best, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/15/2021 3:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend, your kind words and profound appreciation means a lot to me. Have a wonderful thanksgiving ahead.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/15/2021 6:30:00 AM

Your acrostic is zealously done, and contains great depth. I enjoyed reading this, have a great day my friend :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/15/2021 2:58:00 PM

Appreciate your kindness, Rose, your delightful comment is really uplifting to me. I hope you're doing good.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/15/2021 4:40:00 AM

You poured your heart into this poem, Lasaad. So many nuggets of advice for a life of peace and harmony. I hear and feel the message you convey in this poem. You did a lot of work on this and certainly deserve to win.

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/15/2021 2:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay, your delightful comment is so much appreciated, dear friend, hope you doing well.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/15/2021 12:00:00 AM

An amazing poem Lasaad, I don't think you need good luck with this one. Hope you had a lovely weekend. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/15/2021 2:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kindness, Tom, and thanks for the grin you put on my face: ''I don't think you need good luck with this one.'' Hope you doing always good.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/14/2021 10:07:00 PM

Wow! You have certainly done a masterful job in creating this beautiful and wise abecedarian, Lasaad. This sure looks like a winner to me. Happy holidays.

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/15/2021 3:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear, Evelyn, your halcyon words are so uplifting to me and I appreciate that.