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Pillars of salt

You cut me here, without ever saying a word. Then you twisted and turned, your knife into a sword. Then you took back your word, so now I'm never sure. Then you took away my soul, not knowing what it's worth. So I cut myself, to show you where it hurts. "Don't look back there's pillars of salt for sure!" So your dreams washed ashore, gamma/Micro waves of rain. There's the life of our pain, hidden within three words (I love you) So now you sold my soul, not knowing that it was cursed. So I cut myself again to show you where it hurts. "Don't look back there's pillars of salt for sure!"

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Date: 5/24/2025 6:30:00 AM
Interesting Biblical reference used here. Hey, belated welcome to PS Joseph! PS. Did you mean pillars?
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Date: 5/24/2025 6:19:00 AM
I feel you. Tenderly, yet sharp makes emotions clear. Blessings. X
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