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Pillar For My Foundation

Sun sets swiftly for lack of fuss Insidiously dark after dusk As I retire in a shelled husk In contemplation of my fate Lift me up high upon your shoulders Height that awakens the beholder My battleground goes soft and molders I'm reassured it's not too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/27/2009 7:10:00 AM
Yes its never too late -i got curious to read your write about 'The Pillar' similarities and im glad i did--you speak wisdom and faith louder than many and this is a gem--thanks for sharing-,Yoni--Charma
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Date: 1/12/2009 8:21:00 PM
You hit the nail on the head... a mutually destructive relationship. Thanks for your insight! Keith
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Date: 1/12/2009 9:24:00 AM
Cool rhyme scheme and an inspirational message. Well done Yoni! Best wishes, Keith
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