Yoni Dvorkis Poet Verse

Pillar For My Foundation

Sun sets swiftly for lack of fuss
Insidiously dark after dusk
As I retire in a shelled husk
In contemplation of my fate

Lift me up high upon your shoulders
Height that awakens the beholder
My battleground goes soft and molders
I'm reassured it's not too late

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Charmaine Chircop July 27, 2009 at 7:10 AM Yes its never too late -i got curious to read your write about 'The Pillar' similarities and im glad i did--you speak wisdom and faith louder than many and this is a gem--thanks for sharing-,Yoni--Charma

Keith Bickerstaffe January 12, 2009 at 8:21 PM You hit the nail on the head... a mutually destructive relationship. Thanks for your insight! Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe January 12, 2009 at 9:24 AM Cool rhyme scheme and an inspirational message. Well done Yoni! Best wishes, Keith