Pill of Life Contest

Penetrates through walls of doubt,
Illimitable halt of financial drought,
Loaded up with joys continuous sway,
Liquefied gold drowns out clouds of gray.

Originality springs like wild flowers,
Formality is gone by its potent power.

Lay to rest all that’s dead and gone,
Igniting dreams while carrying them on,
Filling forever in all that I see,
Executing wicked forces that would try to stop me.

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Contest: Pill of Life
2/12/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 26, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Sabina, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 1:39 PM
Interesting winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Many congratulations Sabina xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 8:41 PM
very interesting how you made it nature related and acrostic form too. Nice!!
Nicole Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:40 AM
thank you wanted to try something new
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