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Pill of Life Contest

Penetrates through walls of doubt, Illimitable halt of financial drought, Loaded up with joys continuous sway, Liquefied gold drowns out clouds of gray. Originality springs like wild flowers, Formality is gone by its potent power. Lay to rest all that’s dead and gone, Igniting dreams while carrying them on, Filling forever in all that I see, Executing wicked forces that would try to stop me. By: Contest: Pill of Life 2/12/13

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Date: 2/26/2013 2:17:00 PM
Sabina, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2013 1:39:00 PM
Interesting winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 2/24/2013 10:21:00 AM
Many congratulations Sabina xx
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Date: 2/11/2013 8:41:00 PM
very interesting how you made it nature related and acrostic form too. Nice!!
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Date: 2/12/2013 7:40:00 AM
thank you wanted to try something new

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