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Pigeons Pompous city dwellers, pretentious rock doves now parade around like some popinjay or fancy peacock, and yet, they're not persnickety eaters, pooping on everything. (Pleiades) 4/11/2021 Pleiades P Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Date: 4/13/2021 4:41:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. We used to have pigeons all over our downtown square. I think they hired someone to remove them and then fix it where they would not have a place to roost. I like the sounds they make but they do create a mess all around. People used keep them on farms to have food called squab. Sara
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Date: 4/13/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I used to raise pigeons when I was a kid growing up on a farm, and yes they taste good roasted, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2021 2:32:00 AM
- The last line is completely correct ... :))) ... congratulations on your win, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2021 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2021 2:06:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Emile. Janice
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Date: 4/12/2021 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2021 2:04:00 PM
Emile, such a perfect description! It made me laugh! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/12/2021 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate both the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2021 1:43:00 PM
How humorous and wonderful. My favorite write of the bunch. No wonder you scored first!
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Date: 4/12/2021 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Kathleen, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2021 1:07:00 PM
yours is FANTASTIC, Emile. Congrats.
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Date: 4/12/2021 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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