Piers and Suzette

May sunshine and scattered showers
Countdown days and sleepless hours
Village maidens creep from their bowers
Meet amongst the meadow flowers

In a circle they skip and dance

Whilst chanting their love one's name
Enticing as moths to a flame
Each to another and all the same

Jethro, Saul, Piers and Lance.

As storm clouds darkened the blue sky
Each maiden emitted a sigh
Happily with vocals on high
hurried home, to wait bye and bye

Fair Suzette wished to be Piers wife

He waited for the day's sunset
to spread it's golden riverlet
For Piers was in love with Suzette

Dame Fortune had smiled on his life

Piers was due an inheritance
Came by way of a recompense
Family feuds were once intense
Thankfully all now make good sense

The moon lightened his way ahead

He walked then rested for awhile
Reading her note he did smile
Then hurried on over the style

Spurred on by love he quickly tread

Bleating sheep barring his way along
Moved aside as he sang love song
Twas her his heart did belong
He hoped her heart was just as strong

Thoughts of meeting made his heart thud

To rendevous she had agreed
The marshy fen and the tall green reed
Bogged down his progress to impede

He soldiered on caked in the mud

As overhead storm clouds passed
Sinking, helpless, he stared aghast
ankles, then knees he was stuck fast
Frantic, his eyes about him cast

Wind caught words blown far away

Then came a glowing lantern flame
Wending a pathway to her swain
For her his fear he overcame

He lowered his head and then did pray

He heard wild ponies stampeding
Then towards Piers they then did swing
He searched his pockets for some string
Lassoing one did upwards spring

Oh joy he thought my lucky day.

He gained control with frantic haste
Then across the fen he did race
To lift Suzette to his embrace.

They married and named their child May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 10:04 AM
I immensely enjoyed this long yet captivating write, Theresa. Very well executed. Congratulations!! /x/ paul
Stephens Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Hi Paul, Thank you for reading and for your very generous and supportive comments. So pleased you liked it. All the best, Theresa xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations for this amazing winning poem Theresa.
Stephens Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Thank you for reading and much appreciate your kind comment and congrats. Regards Theresa xx
Lindley Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Big congrats on your win!!! A very creative write and a pleasure to read...
Stephens Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 2:23 PM
So pleased you liked it and thank you for your lovely supportive comments. All the best to you. Theresa xx
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:47 AM
Congrats on a fine win, theresa. Quite creative.
Stephens Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 2:24 PM
Hi Dr Ram, Always grateful to receive your very kind comments and support. Regards Theresa xx
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