Piercing Eyes

PIERCING EYES
                                                                              My
                                                                          Ineffable
                                                         Inferno like emotion for you
                                                I tried to bare, for no longer could I bear it.
                                                                      But I could not.
                                       I made to run, to hide far away from you to a sequestered
                                 World of fantasy of my own where this feeling one day enfeebled
                                  And dead would be and its corpse the hearse into the nether world of
                                Illusion would lower.But on time this insidious desire in my eyes,
                            Flawless, so genuine, you saw and those salving hands of yours towards
                                Me  in embrace sauntered,heartsrings pulling kisses, caress abreast 
                                    Behind ambled and my entirety thru the sky of ecstasy scudded
                                        And in gratification nestled.To those eyes of yours eternally
                                            In gratitude my knees will bend, for only piercing eyes
                                                         As those could this sensation lurking
                                                                   In the caverneous depth
                                                                             Of a heart
                                                                                 Bare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/3/2012 11:03:00 PM
Your poem was very interesting and I've never read anything like it. I would rate it 5 out of 5.
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:46:00 AM
I really like the imagery. its a wonderfu work Godwyn
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