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Pier Cove

The air was warm, the sky all grey
We laughed and joked, found lots to say.
With lightning stones held in each hand
We walked barefooted on the sand.
The rain came down, yet with a grin 
We hugged and kissed, drenched to the skin. 


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Contest: Bite Size Poem 6
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
        Placed 1st
Posted: 11th June 2021

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Rhoda Tripp August 5, 2021 at 8:18 AM You've always told me that the best poetry comes spontaneously from the heart. Apparently, this one did. It would seem a cherished memory. Beautifully written. Congratulations on first place!

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2021 at 12:53 PM Love the imagery and romance :) Paul Callus July 29, 2021 at 2:35 AM Thanks ever so much, Kim :) Have a lovely day! // paul

Beryl Edmonds July 20, 2021 at 2:42 PM Hi Paul, it comes as no surprise that you were placed first in Line’s contest. There’s a beautiful memory told in these six lines, memories of a wonderful time… Belle Paul Callus July 21, 2021 at 1:29 PM Thank you Belle. So pleased that you enjoyed. Best regards // paul

Quoth Theraven July 10, 2021 at 1:22 PM Paul, Back for a view of a place where it actually rains. -Richard Paul Callus July 20, 2021 at 1:02 PM Thank you for a repeat visit, Richard; visit any time you feel like it :) Regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 20, 2021 at 3:21 PM Congratulations, Paul, on your brilliant win. A bite-size poem, but says a lot - tender and romantic. "We walked barefooted on the sand" - this line brings many charming memories for me. Thank you, Dear Friend, for visiting my page and for your most inspiring comment, which feels like a blessing. Best wishes and hugs ~ Mala Paul Callus June 22, 2021 at 7:49 AM Thank you, Mala. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my offering. As for visiting your page....it's been a pleasure :) Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Rama Balasubramanian June 18, 2021 at 10:21 PM Wonderful write, tender and emotional, full of love and feelings of joy. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Enjoy your weekend Paul Callus June 22, 2021 at 7:37 AM Thank you for the lovely insightful feedback, Rama....and for the congrats. Hope you enjoyed the weekend as much as I did :) Regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose June 18, 2021 at 10:45 AM That place looks heavenly, in your mind it must be a sanctuary, :) nice one Paul, keep well, sending prayers and hugs your way . Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 2:44 PM Thank you dear Vienna. Warm regards & Hugs coming your way // paul

Eve Roper June 18, 2021 at 7:30 AM Lovely write, Paul, I can feel the warmth in your poem. Good luck in Line's contest. Hugs Eve Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 2:43 PM Thank you for reading and commenting, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul

Lindsay Laurie June 17, 2021 at 5:01 PM Hello Paul … there are times and places where rain cannot dampen enthusiasm - thank you Paul - Lindsay Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:51 AM That comment sums it all up, Lindsay!! Thank you. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith June 14, 2021 at 9:58 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write, rhyme and picture. Love It. Enjoy your win/day with blessings. Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:51 AM Your comments are lovely to read, Paula...thank you! have a nice day. Regards & Blessings // paul

Joanna Daniel June 13, 2021 at 10:35 PM I knew this would win, congratulations, Paul:) Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:49 AM Thank you for coming back with congratulations, Jo. have a lovely weekend :) ~ Regards // paul

Quoth Theraven June 13, 2021 at 8:59 PM Paul, Pretty fine ending in a poem with a grin. A place called Pier Cove, where many wish to stay forever.. even in the rain. -Richard Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:48 AM Thank you Richard. I've never actually set foot on Pier Cove, but the place attracted my attention and inspiration. Pleased you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Greg Gaul June 13, 2021 at 10:33 AM Beautifully done with all the technical pieces falling well in place to encapule some outstanding imagery. Everything that brevity should be. Congratulations. Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:43 AM Thank you for the insightful comments, Greg; very much appreciated. Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman June 13, 2021 at 9:27 AM Absolutely charming and so romantic Paul. Experienced this in the rainy northwest! Brought back many memories of being "soaked to the skin." Your words brought back those visceral memories. Congratulations on your win! Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:42 AM I am pleased that I brought you back some memories, Sam! Thank you for your feedback and congrats. Regards // paul

Christuraj Alex June 13, 2021 at 7:45 AM Lovely. Congratulation!. Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:37 AM Thank you C,A. ~ Best regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose June 13, 2021 at 4:48 AM Ah, so lovely Paul, I can feel the droplets on my skin, as I read your poem, Congrats on your big win, Much love Vie. Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:36 AM I love your sincere comments, as always, Vienna...thank you! Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Supraja Kannan June 12, 2021 at 9:27 AM Lovely romantic verse...I enjoyed reading it... Reads like a winner, Paul... Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:35 AM Thank you for liking my poem, and for the faith you showed in it, Supraja. Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel June 12, 2021 at 3:23 AM A lovely poem, Paul:) such exquisite imagery packed in a few lines:) Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:34 AM Thank you so much, Jo! Your comments are truly appreciated. Regards // paul

Leo Larry Amadore June 11, 2021 at 1:53 PM A pleasant and long treasured (even if not necessarily actual) reminiscence, Paul. I "relived" your precisely related experience and I enjoyed it a lot. Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:33 AM I am so pleased that you enjoyed it, Leo. Thank you for the lovely feedback. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit June 11, 2021 at 10:36 AM Romantic walk in the rain. Enjoyed the happy tenor of your poem, Paul. Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:32 AM Thank you, Vijay. This is one of those poems which naturally rolled off the tongue! ~ Regards // paul

Heidi Sands June 11, 2021 at 10:03 AM This sounds like a special time. Well written Paul :) Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:31 AM Thank you, Heidi; so pleased to have you visiting. Take care my friend. Regards // paul

Alexis Y. June 11, 2021 at 9:37 AM Hi Paul, It sounds like a lovely rainstorm. I found it to be romantic as well; your last was a nice ending to a well-written write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis Paul Callus June 11, 2021 at 2:10 PM Thank you for the lovely comments, Alexis. May you too enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Beryl Edmonds June 11, 2021 at 9:05 AM Sounds like the perfect rainstorm to me, happiness by the sea… Belle Paul Callus June 11, 2021 at 9:26 AM Thank you Belle. These young ones would not let a downpour dampen their feelings! Best regards // paul

Jan Allison June 11, 2021 at 9:02 AM absolutely delightful Paul:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus June 11, 2021 at 9:18 AM Thank you for liking and being the first to stop by, Jan :) Have a lovely weekend! Hugs // paul