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The air was warm, the sky all grey We laughed and joked, found lots to say. With lightning stones held in each hand We walked barefooted on the sand. The rain came down, yet with a grin We hugged and kissed, drenched to the skin. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Bite Size Poem 6 Sponsor: Line Gauthier Placed 1st Posted: 11th June 2021

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Rhoda Tripp

Date: 8/5/2021 8:18:00 AM

You've always told me that the best poetry comes spontaneously from the heart. Apparently, this one did. It would seem a cherished memory. Beautifully written. Congratulations on first place!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2021 12:53:00 PM

Love the imagery and romance :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2021 2:35:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Kim :) Have a lovely day! // paul

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/20/2021 2:42:00 PM

Hi Paul, it comes as no surprise that you were placed first in Line’s contest. There’s a beautiful memory told in these six lines, memories of a wonderful time… Belle

Paul Callus
Date: 7/21/2021 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Belle. So pleased that you enjoyed. Best regards // paul

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/10/2021 1:22:00 PM

Paul, Back for a view of a place where it actually rains. -Richard

Paul Callus
Date: 7/20/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thank you for a repeat visit, Richard; visit any time you feel like it :) Regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/20/2021 3:21:00 PM

Congratulations, Paul, on your brilliant win. A bite-size poem, but says a lot - tender and romantic. "We walked barefooted on the sand" - this line brings many charming memories for me. Thank you, Dear Friend, for visiting my page and for your most inspiring comment, which feels like a blessing. Best wishes and hugs ~ Mala

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2021 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Mala. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my offering. As for visiting your page....it's been a pleasure :) Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/18/2021 10:21:00 PM

Wonderful write, tender and emotional, full of love and feelings of joy. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Enjoy your weekend

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2021 7:37:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely insightful feedback, Rama....and for the congrats. Hope you enjoyed the weekend as much as I did :) Regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/18/2021 10:45:00 AM

That place looks heavenly, in your mind it must be a sanctuary, :) nice one Paul, keep well, sending prayers and hugs your way .

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 2:44:00 PM

Thank you dear Vienna. Warm regards & Hugs coming your way // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2021 7:30:00 AM

Lovely write, Paul, I can feel the warmth in your poem. Good luck in Line's contest. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 2:43:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/17/2021 5:01:00 PM

Hello Paul … there are times and places where rain cannot dampen enthusiasm - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:51:00 AM

That comment sums it all up, Lindsay!! Thank you. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2021 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write, rhyme and picture. Love It. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:51:00 AM

Your comments are lovely to read, Paula...thank you! have a nice day. Regards & Blessings // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/13/2021 10:35:00 PM

I knew this would win, congratulations, Paul:)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:49:00 AM

Thank you for coming back with congratulations, Jo. have a lovely weekend :) ~ Regards // paul

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/13/2021 8:59:00 PM

Paul, Pretty fine ending in a poem with a grin. A place called Pier Cove, where many wish to stay forever.. even in the rain. -Richard

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:48:00 AM

Thank you Richard. I've never actually set foot on Pier Cove, but the place attracted my attention and inspiration. Pleased you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Greg Gaul

Date: 6/13/2021 10:33:00 AM

Beautifully done with all the technical pieces falling well in place to encapule some outstanding imagery. Everything that brevity should be. Congratulations.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:43:00 AM

Thank you for the insightful comments, Greg; very much appreciated. Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/13/2021 9:27:00 AM

Absolutely charming and so romantic Paul. Experienced this in the rainy northwest! Brought back many memories of being "soaked to the skin." Your words brought back those visceral memories. Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:42:00 AM

I am pleased that I brought you back some memories, Sam! Thank you for your feedback and congrats. Regards // paul

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/13/2021 7:45:00 AM

Lovely. Congratulation!.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:37:00 AM

Thank you C,A. ~ Best regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/13/2021 4:48:00 AM

Ah, so lovely Paul, I can feel the droplets on my skin, as I read your poem, Congrats on your big win, Much love Vie.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:36:00 AM

I love your sincere comments, as always, Vienna...thank you! Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/12/2021 9:27:00 AM

Lovely romantic verse...I enjoyed reading it... Reads like a winner, Paul...

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:35:00 AM

Thank you for liking my poem, and for the faith you showed in it, Supraja. Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/12/2021 3:23:00 AM

A lovely poem, Paul:) such exquisite imagery packed in a few lines:)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jo! Your comments are truly appreciated. Regards // paul

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 6/11/2021 1:53:00 PM

A pleasant and long treasured (even if not necessarily actual) reminiscence, Paul. I "relived" your precisely related experience and I enjoyed it a lot.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:33:00 AM

I am so pleased that you enjoyed it, Leo. Thank you for the lovely feedback. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/11/2021 10:36:00 AM

Romantic walk in the rain. Enjoyed the happy tenor of your poem, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:32:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. This is one of those poems which naturally rolled off the tongue! ~ Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/11/2021 10:03:00 AM

This sounds like a special time. Well written Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:31:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi; so pleased to have you visiting. Take care my friend. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/11/2021 9:37:00 AM

Hi Paul, It sounds like a lovely rainstorm. I found it to be romantic as well; your last was a nice ending to a well-written write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2021 2:10:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Alexis. May you too enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/11/2021 9:05:00 AM

Sounds like the perfect rainstorm to me, happiness by the sea… Belle

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2021 9:26:00 AM

Thank you Belle. These young ones would not let a downpour dampen their feelings! Best regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2021 9:02:00 AM

absolutely delightful Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2021 9:18:00 AM

Thank you for liking and being the first to stop by, Jan :) Have a lovely weekend! Hugs // paul