Pieces

Pieces of life
drift in smoky circles over the chimney
grey against the white blue sky we can track
smudgy darkness as it carries
up and over one hundred year evergreens
mixing with your clouds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Konos Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 2:46 PM
WOW .... This is very "Powerful"...So much here to think on. Now everytime I see a chimney I will be looking indepth...WOW... Thank You
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