"pieces"

My thoughts are on the floor like puzzle pieces on the table..
Some  fit together and others are not so able....
A perfect scene of color and dreams but like my thoughts
nothings as it seems... Corner pieces set the day, but jumbled
words cant find there way.. I toss them up and let them fall,
Like raindrops splashing on my walls... Tomorrow we start again,
a different view might clear my mind and all will blend...Till this
picture done and we can see our life... I shall carry these pieces
till one day they rhyme...........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 8, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Enjoyed reading your featured write here Michael..)
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April 8, 2012 at 9:16 AM
congrats dear friend on this being featured keep on sharing hoppy easter
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April 8, 2012 at 6:16 AM
congrats on the featured poem....i really liked it...........~sashi
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April 4, 2012 at 8:52 PM
I enjoyed and congrats on feature...Patrick
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April 2, 2012 at 9:38 PM
congrats Michael luv on featured poem this week on PS .. most wonderful emotions shared ..JG in luv mode ..xoxo..
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April 1, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much and congrats..Patrick
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March 8, 2010 at 11:12 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. May you have a wonderful week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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March 7, 2010 at 10:03 AM
carry the pieces till they rhyme? so carry the puzzle that doesn't seem to fit, but hoping during life you'll find that they change and mix? very interesting poem definite good read.
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