Piece of My Past

walking along the beach today,
i saw you,
you looked at me, then slowly 
walked away,
you had told me that you were 
different from the last,
but you turned out to be 
just a piece of my past,
you really know how to make 
me hurt,
was it love? 'cause im no expert,
i thought it was, at the time,
but now lookin back,
you were never mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this one Rachelle!! You express an entire movie in these few words!! (This is Mrs. CL Creek).
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May 9, 2012 at 1:11 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Rachelle. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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May 24, 2012 at 11:00 PM
Oooh you are so much welcome!! Your writes are truly inspiring, so keep it up. THanks you ~ I truly hope you have a wonderful weekend and a cheerful day =)
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April 7, 2012 at 6:58 PM
Interesting write. Very open and clear in the point it makes.
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May 4, 2012 at 10:21 AM
Thanks you
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