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Piece of Heaven

On a soft and turning river his thoughts are drifting with the flow current so relaxing underneath a bright moon glow Stars reflecting on the water ricocheting off the surface he finds a sense of inner peace the rivers subtle purpose Imagining an eternity in the current he pretends he's found a piece of heaven hopes the river never ends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 11:41:00 PM
Ron, this is an outstanding poem. I, too, find peace in the rivers and seas. Bravo! Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2009 8:01:00 PM
Very beautiful and dreamy quality to this, has a tranquil feel. I love the images you convey here, quite a picture you have painted with this lovely word-art. :) Blessings... Amy
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