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Oliver Mckeithon Tricube Contest

My husband, being analytical, read and mispronounced most of the pastries listed at a Parisian style pastry shop (we are going to breakfast there tomorrow).

 

All the French
I can take -
piece of cake.

A baguette
or croissants?
Paris tempts.

Cream inside;
lick my lips.
Morrow’s trip.

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Date: 7/30/2025 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Piece of Cake" write. Sounds like a great breakfast place. Enjoy... Have a blessed day with your win.........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2025 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 7/29/2025 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim! I'm looking forward to taste all that French ... bread, pastries and cake ... going to France in a month...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2025 4:25:00 PM
Ooh…have a great time!
Date: 7/29/2025 12:47:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Kim. I am hungry after reading. Although I have to be gluten and dairy free:(
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2025 4:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/24/2025 8:29:00 AM
I just realized I'm hungry, Kim! Excellent response to the prompt. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2025 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 7/24/2025 12:54:00 AM
waw, you made me wondder about french patisseries, better know, i never resist to temptations, so beautifully written, well done poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2025 5:26:00 AM
Thank you, Yann! <3
Date: 7/23/2025 9:30:00 PM
Very interesting write. Sounds yummy :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2025 9:47:00 PM
Can’t wait! Hubby not working this week. He saw this restaurant…oui, oui! I concur!
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