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Pie In the Sky - Dedicated To Andrea Deitrich

guided streams  of bright lights few squeeze through a crystal tight sky 
colours this nature scene brand new a freshly baked pumpkin spiced pie

a random popsicle purple glaze
a toddler's finger painted blaze

the friendliest of all the river trees
dances calmly with a random breeze

the sun dives into his liquid bronze fate
as the wild plants wave back to placate 

daily harmony here come with ease 
while humans struggle just to appease
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nusker Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Wow such lovely imagery and a wonderful tribute to Andrea. Simply love it.
A   Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Oh yes, she is the most deserved on this site. I see her beauty, little claws, but pure beauty. She has a special place in my Texas heart, So do you. A perfect 7. Linda
Turner Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on the top spot Maurice. Just excellent poetry!
Thirtyseven Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 12:27 AM
No. 1 in the top 100, and a dedication to Andrea. How could I resist? What a fabulous write, well deserved of its top placing.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 12:15 AM
Congrats on being number one of the top 100 this month. Well done!
Robertson Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Very good, very neat heart felt and complete. Quite a treat.
Austin Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Your opening stanza is charming, a quick, smooth blending of words. "friendliest of all the river trees," and other has a child in mind, or am I wrong? You are wonderfully inventive. Love, daver
Devonshire Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 1:37 PM
What a beautiful poem to dedicate to Andrea! It is filled with created imagery and symbolism. I like thinking of Andrea as "the friendliest of all the river trees" that "dances calmly with a random breeze." A favorite for me, Maurice. I'm sure this poem pleases Andrea, too. Love, Carolyn
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 9:16 AM
What a great dedication! I will check out your You Tube.
Salehi Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Great dedication to a wonderful friend.... Life is a circle, hooked like a chain. Everything goes, and come back again.....
Callus Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 3:21 PM
So pleased to have stumbled across this lovely poem, Armand. Great to see you posting again; long time no see:) Congrats on p.o.t.d. ~~ Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 2:36 PM
- So sweet of you, to Andrea - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 8:51 PM
oh and another thing. I listened to the Silly Today poem on youtube. You are hysterical as ever!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 8:50 PM
oh and POTD WOW. Congrats!!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Awwww, what a cute poem, Armand. I am glad I came to see this tonight. I was about ready to call it a day without even answering comments and then I got the urge to see if you had something new here. Wow, dedicated to me. Thanks so much, my sweet friend. I love the imagery, especially the lines with toddler's finger. You are an original always!!! FAVE
Daniel Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 12:57 AM
Congratulations on POTD:) great poem for a great person:) the concluding lines are the best:)
Chansarkar Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 11:48 AM
The last two lines are very true and thoughtful.Fantastic poem,Maurice!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Lovely words dedicated to a friend! Congrats for POTD. Sunita :)
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Nice write, Maurice, your talent is always beaming. Congratulations on Poem of the day well deserved. Hugs
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 10:16 AM
woohoo Armand congrats on POTD my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Hi Maurice, This is a beautiful dedication to Andrea. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Lovely Maurice, congratulations on POTD honors...
Sergi Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Beautiful dedication! Congrats on the POTD.
Capitano Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:24 AM
Super!!! Congrats on POTD.
Turner Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:03 AM
Lovely Maurice. Fantastic poetry! Congratulations on POTD.
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