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Pictures of the Missing

I sit here reminiscing Looking at my pictures of the missing
In this one, he’s in the first grade, with a smile that's wide and bright That MISSING tooth in the center, he lost the previous night Here, he’s in the snow, with it still falling from above Look at his little cold, left hand, we never did find that MISSING glove Ahhhh, look, he’s playing baseball, with that silly crooked hat I’m afraid he’s MISSING another pitch with that way-too-heavy bat This one is a birthday party, he is counting the candles on his cake Unfortunately it was MISSING one and he turned twelve again by mistake Oh, here is his first car, a fixer-up indeed It was MISSING most of the engine parts that a running engine really needs In this one what is MISSING you cannot really see But I am sure that he is MISSING another class at University I hope I didn’t mislead you, my son is still with us today I am just looking at old photos and having fun with some wordplay written and posted on 3/2/12 for the "Missing" contest

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Date: 3/13/2012 3:17:00 PM
I knew this was good. Congrats on your win, Joe! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2012 4:14:00 PM
Ah yes a real gem Joe a 7 & to my fav's Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:31:00 PM
This is a very god write on the theme of the contest Joe.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/12/2012 12:07:00 PM
Joe congrats on your win, lots of memories there..David
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest Joe. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:09:00 AM
congrats Joe on a wonderful write and win for this stirring piece.. so deep and profound luv..
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed your reminiscing - glad your son is ok :)
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Date: 3/3/2012 12:15:00 AM
joe,I love how you did the missing contest. I sure wish I could think up some clever idea like you did!! I'm stymied on some of these contests right now. Good luck, but I dont' think you need it!!
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:54:00 PM
I have to admit, Joe, I was quite nervous when I started reading. I'm glad your son is well and WITH you. A very clever write. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/2/2012 2:27:00 PM
it's so great how you wove "missing" into each verse and really captured key moments in your son's life. well-done!
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Date: 3/2/2012 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed your clever write, Joe. I really like the way you did this for the contest. Best wishes. Love, Kim
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