Picture Perfect

wind gently blowing

                           freedom up in the sky

                            mem'ries in old barn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Aiyah, Congrats on your win. "Wind gently blowing..." I feel it. Haiku is one of my friend.
Merryman Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Congrats on your nice win, Aiyah! Love, Kim
A   Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 8:39 PM
nice win, Luv ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Nicely done, Aiyah. Congratulations.
Callus Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Pleased to be back to read this lovely haiku again, and to offer my congratulations on a lovely win, Aiyah!:) hugs // paul
Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 5:13 AM
nice Aiyah congrats on placing hugs
Johnson Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Beautifully done. One of my favorites in the contest.
A  Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Aiyah. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**
Callus Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:43 PM
I can notice the feelings of a person breaking away from the past and moving on to the freedom that the future is offering. Lovely haiku; gl in the contest Aiyah. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 10:57 AM
vivid imagery.. :)! musta Aiyah? :)!
Torres Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:48 PM
thanks Eloi.. i'm good ^_^
A  Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:38 PM
lovely write .. *always, S.K.A.T.*
Torres Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:43 PM
thanks dear :)
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 3:44 PM
beautiful imagery Aiyah good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Torres Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:48 PM
thank you ,Jan :O)
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