Pictorial

blue skies, white foam; ride turquoise seas. pine scent, sourced breeze, green sunshine glow. flag flaps, afloat - turns, twists; a treat of shadowed clouds - p i c t o r i a l with chimney smoke. earth’s breast heaving; sun’s eyes gleaming as dusk breaks through. ribboned moon glow - a heady gloam.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 3:30 PM
Hey, I was writing something similar on my last poem, lol. Yours is beautiful <3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 6:55 PM
How cool!
Empress Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 3:03 AM
This is magical and gorgeous! I love the descriptive manner youv painted imagery and word choices throughout! A fave for me! Pleasure reading your poem today dear Kim.. Sending you light always
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 6:39 AM
So happy that you like this one, dear Ink! Thank you!
Daniel Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 9:23 PM
Beautiful, Kim, great imagery in so few words:)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 9:40 PM
Thank you, Joanna!
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 8:42 PM
Amazing imagery, Kim. A fave for sure
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 9:40 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!
Godwin Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 6:12 PM
I bow and applaud, unlike Brian (reference to some blogs of his), to me it is the punctuation that separates a poem delivering clarity from one that delivers frowns. It was a treat reading this.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 6:50 PM
Some need punctuation! Thank you, CayCay!
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