Picnic In the Fall Contest

During the fall overwhelmed with crisp air,
Is a time where I like to share,
A treat with my sweetest love,
While we gaze far above,
Underneath the late noon sky,
After the bugs don’t want to fly,
I can enjoy the time we share,
As the cool breeze blows my hair,
Laying down on Satin sheets,
In the grass our eyes do meet,
Eating fruit from the vine,
A glass of Merlo adds to our dine,
Purple, pink, reds and blues,
A canvas painted just for two,
Sounds of leaves whispering as they meet,
Glorious birds harmonizing beats,
Marching ants finishing up their day,
Alongside where we lay,
souls are restored by the silent lake,
Nature gives, it does not take,
Quiet reflection of our day,
A picnic in the fall is the best way!

5-10-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:39 PM
Nicely done, Sabina. A big congrats to you in the contest.
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May 19, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Having a fall picnic beside a lake and enjoyig all the sights and sounds of nature sounds fabulous, Sabina. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:11 PM
Sabina, good to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on your HM, Sabina. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:15 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, Sabina
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Congrats Sabina on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and creativity ..
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:03 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Well Sabina this sure sounds delightful and in the Fall too.. different .. inviting.. good luck in the contest with this beautiful entry luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 10, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Nice write on the picnic during the fall, a second spring, Sabina
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