Picking Diamonds

Foggy mist from the creek rises
Accented by a gold sun
Wispy clouds lie white against blue
When the crack of dawn is done

Heavy dew sparkles or looks white
Upon the grass lime green
Waterdroplets cling like diamonds
In the scheme of things

Capture one for my ring finger
Two for my pierced ears
About ten for a heart pendant
But they'll all disappear

If acquiring things could be so
easy, life lived so grand
We'd all luxurate in diamonds
and be dressed in name brand

Life is not so easy, it has
its demands, there's little
free gold, life is work untold
and money comes in dribbles  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 16, 2014 at 11:47 PM
Beauty in every line. Sara, you are one of the best poets of this site..Linda
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 10:42 PM
wow, this is really nice. Kind of deep!! I love the part about wearing the dewdrops as diamonds before they all disappear!
Horsman Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 5:13 PM
exceptional poetry Sara, so clever too,,just love the message
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 8:54 AM
What a cleverly exquisite piece! I just love the thought that went into this one 7777777.
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 7:35 AM
yes, such truth here, my friend
Lindley Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 7:06 AM
My friend this is another true gem of a write... Excellent from start to finish!!!!!
Sathasivam Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 3:14 AM
Excellent. As usual your quality write is shown here. Enjoyed. Tfs
Carroll Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 1:32 PM
Good write Sara..Hope you're having a wonderful weekend!
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 2:26 PM
ohh, a sparkling piece and a true gem of a write, sara... a rare take on the theme.. huggs
Chutani Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Sara, a beautiful imagery on hard work, diamonds and how it all disappears. Love it. Mohan
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