Picalso...

mi casa mi amigo
... in thanks, I leave you
... years of living in you
... fragmented tears
... given to you
... leaving soon...

mi casa mi amigo
... A spirit in you
... traveled from afar
... form within form
... from a distant star
... eyes uneven
... but peering far
... tired of believing
... yet tHere you are

mi amigo
... it's time to go
... better in the pence
... the road will show
... a knot in the fence is old
... a twisted and blistered soul
... yearns for understanding
... the passer by is glancing
... but no one stopped
... and just a drop
... was all I needed
... seeded in relief
... when I heard true...

mi casa, mi amigo... isn't you.


"... it's not in the house..."
"... come play with me..."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 6:08 PM
Muy Bien Izzy.. Mi Gusta su poem... Flowed like a raging river....RdP
Guzzi Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 12:35 PM
goodness where your mind travels and it leaves me in the wake..I want a tag, a rope, a life saver, a hook to travel where you're going! Fret....Light & Love
Norman Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 2:43 PM
awesome poem, nice style of layout, and as enjoyable to read as ever (in the short time i've been reading you :p ) peace and all the good stuff
Sweetheart Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 5:00 AM
WOW .. Izzy u done good on this one... how very unique and enjoyable this poetry was and very different too.. most talented lady... just read this with my java... good start to Sunday... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Gumbo Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 10:10 PM
Yes, by his work, you'd think Picasso was most definitely twisted and blistered as most didn't understand him... I can relate. Mi Amigo... is not the girl in the house either :) thank you always for reading and the kind and supportive comments.
Griffiths Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 8:06 PM
This is lovely Izzy, well written. Pam
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 4:04 PM
Like the lines a twisted and blistered soul yearns for understanding. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
Freeman Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Tenes buen vocabulario,mi Amiga! Tu tienes mucho talento, Sinceramente, El Moses A very witty and cute write Izzy, Sincerely, Love, Moses
Sheart Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 8:44 AM
Excellelnt write Izzy. Truly enjoyed. Love Light Patty
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November 14, 2009 at 5:17 AM
Wow Izzy,..its like so poerful when you write this way,..I almost felt as if I was watching a short clip ! You could turn this into a short story I'm sure,..or add to its thoughts in your own way ! james
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