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A mirror revelation of a bitter soul.

Smok’n hot in his black suit, a cool dude - he’s not. Sickle swings shattering glass - silencing bitter sand. Your ignominious ghost broods your grim image, under the reaper’s hood. Nette Onclaud’s Pic Motifs: Visual 2 11/17/2017 29 words

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Date: 11/19/2017 7:28:00 AM
Good all over--a splendid depiction!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Vijay!
Date: 11/18/2017 7:57:00 PM
oooh, you were better with imagery for that grim reaper than I was!! We saw who that was, didn't we!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 9:12:00 PM
For sure!
Date: 11/18/2017 7:45:00 PM
Smok’n hot... love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thanks Line!

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