Notes About The Poem

A mirror revelation of a bitter soul.

Pic Motifs: Visual 2

Smok’n hot in his black suit,

a cool dude - he’s not.

Sickle swings shattering glass -

silencing bitter sand.

Your ignominious ghost

broods your grim image,

under the reaper’s hood.

Nette Onclaud’s Pic Motifs: Visual 2
11/17/2017
29 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:28 AM
Good all over--a splendid depiction!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Thanks Vijay!
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:57 PM
oooh, you were better with imagery for that grim reaper than I was!! We saw who that was, didn't we!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:12 PM
For sure!
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Smok’n hot... love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Thanks Line!
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