Tahera Mannan Poet Crystalline

Piano

Dark ebony wood hums vibrantly.........
                                   soft white fingers drift over the.......
                                                                                              smooth ivory

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Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2011 at 10:11 PM soupmail.

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2011 at 7:34 AM Great one...Enjoyed your work..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Your review of my work was greatly appreciated..Sara

Skat A January 9, 2011 at 8:13 PM A VERY SUAVE POEM. TAHERA.. I BET THE FINGERS PLAYING THE PIANO,, ENJOYS AS WELL THE BEAUTIFUL IMAGE YOU PAINTED HERE~luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire January 8, 2011 at 9:10 AM Your lovely poem has a dreamy quality to it, Tahera. Beautiful image of the fingers "drifting" over the "smooth ivory." Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2011 at 11:38 AM Very descriptive and expressive work..Reads like a sure winner to me..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and leaving encouraging comments..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta January 7, 2011 at 7:00 AM The fingers, the touch of love, creates music even out of ebony wood, Tahera. Good luck.

Kash Poet January 7, 2011 at 12:20 AM This one is excellent Tahera!Thanks for your congratulatory message-kashinath

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2011 at 10:40 PM OOOH, this is one of the best for imagery I think. Luv, Andrea

Harry Horsman January 6, 2011 at 9:41 PM very sweet, love this, good luck. Harry

Francine Roberts January 6, 2011 at 9:16 PM lovely imagery, good luck in the contest